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Here is the positive feedback:
The room was spacious and relatively clean. It even had a small kitchen sink and a mini fridge with a separate freezer, making it a useful option for those who plan to stay longer.
Now, let's get to the drawbacks:
1. The fitted sheet didn't cover the whole mattress, and the mattress was visibly yellow.
2. There were only three small pillows for a king-sized bed.
3. We were only provided with one large towel. We had to ask for another one and we had to go down there ourselves to get it.
4. The towels were old and worn out.
5. There was no coffee maker in the room, and we had to request one to be brought to us.
6. The shower was small, and the shower curtain rod was installed so far inward, making the shower stall feel even smaller.
7. There was a crack between the entry door and the frame, which made us feel uncomfortable and like our privacy was being invaded. We had to hang a towel to cover it up.
8. The hallway was musty, and the carpets were old, worn out, and dirty.